My review of “Force Of Nature” by Margot Scott

Andrew
3 min readNov 26, 2023

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We all have different thoughts on what is and is not appropriate in the fantasy fiction we enjoy. For some, this story will be over the line. Be sure to read the author’s trigger warnings before you decide to read it.

Willow is eighteen years old. She was raised as an only child by her father, Erik after her mother died in childbirth. Having completed her secondary schooling, Willow is preparing to leave home to attend the Ivy League school she has been accepted by.

Willow and Erik try to take a camping trip every year. For what might be their final trip, they are revisiting a favourite site at Yellowstone National Park.

They stop to soak in a hot spring along the trail to their campsite. They haven’t been there long when four men approach and join them in the spring. Erik is uneasy and decides to move on with Willow as soon as possible.

They reach their site, strike camp and are settled by their campfire when the four men show up. Their intentions toward Willow become more apparent, and Erik is calculating his chances if he needs to take on all four when one pulls a gun.

The men overpower Erik and assault Willow. When it is revealed she is a virgin, they decide Erik should take her virginity — at knife and gunpoint — after which they will all use her.

Margot Scott pulls no punches and leaves nothing to the imagination in her description of the assault and of the anguish experienced by both father and daughter, who relay their story in alternating chapters. The story deals with the assault, the victims’ subsequent escape and the retribution visited on their assailants, and the rebuilding of their relationship in the aftermath.

There is a lot of sex in this story. Some of it is violent; more is non-consensual. It is all very “taboo” or “forbidden” and squirm-inducing on multiple levels.

I thought it was a great read. Uncomfortable in appropriate places. I quickly became attached to Willow and invested in her future, with which I was satisfied.

Recommended if the subject matter appeals and you have read the author’s trigger warnings.

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Complete list of triggers:
- Incest (dad/daughter)
- Age Gap (20+ years)
- Noncon + Dubcon
- Sexual assault by multiple men
- Physical violence
- Weapons (gun, knife)

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Now that I knew how good she tasted and had felt her from the inside, I couldn’t go back to seeing her as anything else. She wasn’t just my little girl anymore. She was my little girl with my cock in her mouth and a glint in her eye that seemed to say, It’s all right, Daddy. I still love you.

It wasn’t supposed to be like this. My first time should have been with a boy my age in a dim, smoke-filled dorm room, not at knifepoint with my dad, in the middle of the forest, surrounded by monsters. But that’s how it happened, and we couldn’t take it back.

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